This paper offers an informative and practically relevant study on the environmental benefits of permeable pavements. The use of real-world field monitoring and analysis of multiple water quality metrics is commendable. However, the manuscript is not well formatted and lacks a reference list, which is critical for academic completeness. Additionally, the discussion could be strengthened with more critical analysis and a clearer positioning within existing literature. If resubmitted with proper modifications such as citations and reference list and formatting guidelines, the work could make a valuable contribution to the conference. I recommend major revisions to substantially improve the quality of the manuscript.